My Pepeha

Blog comment of the week.

I have repeated myself a bit here.  My teacher has been talking about eliminating the woffle, which means getting to the point and being clear and concise in what you want to say.  I thought I did well, but she just said to me that I am still woffling (I don't even know if I'm spelling this right).

Next time I will give feedback / advice about the persons work I am commenting on.

Spelling

Zectangle - (art)

WALT: draw art nice and carefully with zectangles.

MY Hook

My Survey Results

Today we used google forms to create a survey as part of our statistics unit.  Together we asked questions and sent the link to our class.
This is what I found out.

Cross country

                                                                 Cross Country
Cr “Ready, get set…. BANG!” shouted Whaea Rosina. I raced off sprinting as fast as a jet. Although I don’t enjoy running, I was trying to beat Angel-Rose, Sally and Jahvis. How’d you think I went? I didn’t beat them while I was sprinting...but wait for it, this turtle had a plan. I don’t care that I might be losing against Angel and Sally, they’re fast, I know that. I did care about beating Jahvis though. I smoked him, haha eat my dust I thought. The hill was coming up. I was already feeling sore. My legs were sore, I had a stitch….man, runnings brutal! I remember thinking, I might just walk this part. As I came down the hill, I was stoked. I got to rest, it didn’t seem as hard. I could hear my teacher screaming out to me, as I came up to her section of the track. “Go Angel! Go Sally! Go Veej” (That’s what she calls me). I was puffed. Even though she was telling me to ‘go, go, go’ I was thinking, ‘no, no, no’. Thank god I only had to run one lap. Bugger running two laps. So, to end my story guess what….this turtle came first for my age. My plan worked...hehehehehe.