Rongoa Maori

My piece of writing

3/9/2018   

“Ouch” said my brother “ ow ow ow ow” so Rio and Simon took my brother to whaea Stacy my mum. He said “Mum I think I broke my arm” so mum went and touched  it to see how bad it was. And well who knew he screamed . So Mum rushed down too …. Kawakawa as fast as she could she would break the law if she had to “wow”. When they arrived at the Kawakawa hospital the doctors had to twist and turned his arm to xray it and guess happened next? I won’t say it. (spoiler).

“WAWAWA!!!!!!”  he said (lol) as he turned  turn his arm.

When they finished checking the xrays  they put only the back of the cast on and IDK when they

put the front on.

Fixed arm                                                          

            

Broken                                                                         

                  

                                                                        

My comment

WALT: pick a random person and comment 

My comment is good because I didn't repeat myself and did something different I did a dare.
So that's me. Nga mihi V.J

Blog posted

WALT: post 5 blogs every week.

I think that its horrible cause its not like a graph when they are connected on the tall thing's.

 And everything else well on a scale of 1 to 10 9/10.

What do you think type in comments down below.

Nga mihi V.J 

My art

I think that I rushed the top but the bottom i'm 

am very Proud of.

so in conclusion I happy but not so happy at the same time.

My comment of this week.

I think that this is a good post I didn't repeat myself all my words are correct my vocab is good and grammar. So yeah. Nga mihi V.J

Words for plastic

I think I over did it some you can't see.