Recount Writing-I went to the Park

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I went to the park.

On Saturday afternoon me and mum drove to the park in Kaikohe to play.

I felt pumped to see all the things to play on.

When we got to the park we saw the swing, the slide and every fun thing. I said, “Wohoo, so many things to play on”

The first thing I did at the park was speeding to the slide. It looked like the funniest thing in the park. Then I bolted to the swing I said, “Wheee, I'm going so high.” I felt like a flying bird on the swing. I was going so high. As high as a plane.

Next I ran to the monkey bars. On the monkey bars I was climbing like a monkey. I said, “Mum, Dad, Nan, look at me. I’m going backwards.” I felt a like a monkey swinging backwards and forwards.

After that I chose the last thing to play on. I said, “Mmmmm, let’s play on the slide one more time.”  So I did. I felt like the luckiest kid ever.