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30/4/18
WALT: proofread my work first

At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis
Seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. Scare
someone to pieces. As the school year continued,Dora began to understand how the teacher came up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs.Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

Music is an form that appears in every culture in the world. For thousands of years it's been an important part of the human experience.
Music has been used as entertainment as a way to pass on stories, and as a form of artistic expression.Each person may have their own preference  in the type of Music they like most but people will like music in some form.Music has even been used by therapists to help patients with mental and physical health issues and and achieved good results
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The pursuit of independence in the later half of the 19th century in the American colonies developed slowly. As punitive and onerous laws were imposed by the British crown and parliament, resentment grew
 among the American colonists. In 1774 the colonists established a
separate shadow government and began training troops near Boston Massachusetts. After military conflicts in 1875 at Lexington and Concord, and at the of battle at  Bunker Hill, the independence movement gained momentum. George Washington named Commander of the Continental Army in March 1776 and representative  of each colony meet in Philadelphia in June, 1776 to draft the historical declaration of Independence.