Easter carnival - My recount

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• I will have a title
• I will have an orientation(who what where when how)
• I will use sequence words(first,next,after,then,
• finally,shortly)
• I talked about how I felt

Kerikeri Feastival

On Sunday me, Mum, Rawiri and Joeche all went to the
easter carnival in Kerikeri.
It felt like it took us a long time to get there.

First we got stuck in the traffic, we were lucky it was only the
morning. The easter carnival was starting in 2 hours.

Finally!, we got there it had already started.
They were starting the big easter hunt they hid the
easter eggs in the hay.
I saw where they put the eggs so I knew where to look.
One egg was all the way on the left hand side of the hay
poking out so I grabbed that one. I  saw another one on the top
in a tiny gap you could see  through the hay, so I grabbed that
one too. I saw the  third egg it was in the hay where you can’t
see it, but I found it When I ripped the hay apart so that’s three
easter eggs. I found 3 eggs but there will be easter eggs for
prizes at the games.

Next I ran to the games the first game was to throw a sticky ball
at either a 5,  15 and a 25 you had to hit one for a prize and
then you could choose between bubbles and chocolate,
I chose chocolate and then I went back to play again so I could
 win bubbles for Rawiri and Joeche.

Meanwhile Joeche and Rawiri got their faces painted. Joeche
had a tiger face and Rawiri had a Spiderman face.  Joeche
looked cool with the tiger and Rawiri got fake sticky spider
webs with it and Joeche got claws.

Then we went to another game but the line was too long so I
said to mum “can we go on the cars” and Mum said “yes”. So
Me and Joeche got in the cars and raced to see who would win.
 Joeche got in the front car and I got in the back, while Rawiri
went on the big inflated slide. Joeche was in the lead and I was
just at the back but when there was a corner I took a sharp turn
so he closed in on me but I went a little faster and took the lead.
 When we came to the corner he went to much to the other side
and he crashed, so I automatically win.

After that  Joeche asked if we could go on the bucking bull it’s
when you get on the machine bull and it tries to buck you off ,

the bull is controlled by a  man. So Rawiri went first and he got
put him on a low speed so he was on the longest, he stayed on
for 7 minutes but when Joeche went on it was at half way and
he stayed on for 3 minutes when I jumped on and I was at full
speed I stayed on for 6 minutes I thought that was good
because it was on full speed. Later that afternoon we had
frozen cokes because we were dying in the heat so we bought
3 frozen cokes and 1 rasberry and after that we went home.  

I enjoyed my day because it was cool because we got to do
heaps of activities.

I have achieved my  WALT.