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Wednesday, May 30, 2018

Proof Read First

30/4/18
WALT: proofread my work first

At the start of school Dora was afraid of her new teacher. Mrs. Davis
Seemed nice, but she had so many rules for the class to follow. Scare
someone to pieces. As the school year continued,Dora began to understand how the teacher came up with the rules. The rules were there so students would be respectful of themselves and each other. By the end of the year, Dora thought Mrs.Davis was the best teacher she ever had!

Music is an form that appears in every culture in the world. For thousands of years it's been an important part of the human experience.
Music has been used as entertainment as a way to pass on stories, and as a form of artistic expression.Each person may have their own preference  in the type of Music they like most but people will like music in some form.Music has even been used by therapists to help patients with mental and physical health issues and and achieved good results
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The pursuit of independence in the later half of the 19th century in the American colonies developed slowly. As punitive and onerous laws were imposed by the British crown and parliament, resentment grew
 among the American colonists. In 1774 the colonists established a
separate shadow government and began training troops near Boston Massachusetts. After military conflicts in 1875 at Lexington and Concord, and at the of battle at  Bunker Hill, the independence movement gained momentum. George Washington named Commander of the Continental Army in March 1776 and representative  of each colony meet in Philadelphia in June, 1776 to draft the historical declaration of Independence.

Wednesday, March 21, 2018

Taking flight

WALT: Plan and write a recount based on taking flight” animation.
22/2/2018
The wonderful adventure
chapter 1 the sad bit
Yesterday morning my dad dropped me off at grandad’s
House. First I hopped out of the car and I fell over. Next I followed dad to  grandad. Grandad said “sit tite”.
I felt sad.

chapter 2 the wagon
Then I saw something I climbed up the shelf and got it down.
It was a picture of dad on a wagon.
Grandad came over and said “that use to your dads wagon how about we take it for a spin”. I said “ok”.

chapter 3 the Imagination
After that grandad said “ put hands and legs in at all times”
So  grandad took me for a spin and he said “there are monkeys around here they cause a lot of trouble.
Then we ran and then we jumped in the water then in a boat
A crocodile jumped at us it missed us.
Then we fall down a huge waterfall.
Later on me and grandad had lunch and then
The aliens came and blasted the soccer goal
Later on we had lunch and the aliens came and lazered the soccer goal. So we got in a spaceship and started shooting the aliens.
We had a big day i felt happy so walked home.

The end

WALT follow instructions

WALT: Follow instructions
To be successful I will
  1. screenshot my Learning
  2. explain what I am doing in steps
  3. use the pictures as clues to support me. 



This at the first is what I have succeed 


Friday, March 2, 2018

Explanation Writing - Kindness


Kindness
2/3/2018

Kindness is a helpful nice thing that people do for others.
      
Kindness is when a person does something thoughtful. For example, when someone comes over and asks you if they could play with you say yes in a nice way that is being kind. Kindness is use for making friend and doing nice things for your friends.

How is kindness used?
Kindness is like nice things like respect your teacher, aroha, manaakitanga and accepting people.

Kindness as making people happy, giving good comments, and feeling grateful For what you get.

I think that kindness is important because it makes people feel special and awesome.

Self moderated by Me - VJ
Ideas
Structure & Language
Vocabulary
Sentence structure
Organisation
Punctuation
Spelling
Total
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3
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26

Total: 25 3b

Wednesday, February 28, 2018

Smart Learner

WALT: Be savvy about how we search for media online 
Success Criteria: We will acknowledge our sources

Friday, February 23, 2018

Kawa of care


WALT: Create a DLO that inspires learners to follow our Kawa of Care.
Success Criteria: