Recount Writing - William’s birthday.

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16/10/17

William’s birthday

On a lovely and beautiful Sunday morning it was William’s birthday at his house in town. I was pumped to be invited to William’s birthday. I was very excited.

First me, my mum and Rawiri walked inside. My mum said, “V.J I will pick you up soon.”   So my mum and Rawiri went home and I stayed at William's birthday. When my mum left I said, “What can I do today?” So I walked into the room and I played on the xbox 360. It was fun. William had all of the games like Assassin's Creed and GTA 5 or Modern Warfare. We played Modern Warfare. Next the game got a bit boring so me William and Cyprus played outside with bikes on the road. It was fun. I was riding as fast as I could. Later on we found a hand ball. So we started to play handball. It was so fun and fantastic.

I thought I will never go to a birthday like that.

Persuasive writing - We should do homework every day

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18.10.17

We should do homework every night

I think we should do homework every night.

Firstly I think we should do homework every night because

you can have 1 on 1 time with your mum when you are reading a book to her.  

Secondly I think we should do homework every night because we will achieve our goals by practicing our learning.

Another reason is so we can be very smart.

Lastly I think we should do homework every night because you can give your brain a workout.

So that's why I think we should do homework every night.

Persuasive writing - We should play sport every day.

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19.10.17

We should play Sport every day.

I think we should play sport every day.

First I think we should play sport every day because playing sports gives us good exercise.

Secondly I think we should play sport every day because when you play sport like when you're running you get lots of oxygen and oxygen is good for your body especially your heart.

Another reason I think we should play sport every day is because you can get fit by playing sport. This is because you do lots of running around when you play sport.

Lastly I think we should play sport every day because you can learn lot of skills and work as a team.

So that’s why I think we should play sport every day.