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Tuesday, March 22, 2016

This is my first published story for 2016.

2 comments:

  1. Awesome story son. I like how you use capital letters and full stops.

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  2. I like your story Vj about spending a holiday with your family in Opononi. I like the way your sentences were placed and capital letters and full stops were used.
    Well done👍

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