I think we should eat healthy food
30.03.17
WALT use the correct structure for Persuasive Writing.
I think we should eat healthy food.
Firstly I think we should eat healthy food because your skin and your body will work properly. Secondly I think we should eat healthy food then all the nutrients in the food will keep you up all day. Another reason I think we should eat healthy food because we will learn and play and won’t be tired. Lastly I think we should eat healthy food then we will be full of beans all day. So that is why I think we should eat healthy food.
Hi VJ, I really enjoyed reading this persuasive writing about why we should eat healthy food. Well done for successfully using the correct structure. You are awesome!
ReplyDeleteA way you can improve your writing is to think of an interesting hook about your topic. For example, "Crunchy, juicy, fresh food. Yum! Write it just before you say what you think. Keep up the great blogging!