I am learning to organise my ideas using the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
09.03.2017
Yesterday me and Hilton were pretending to play a minecraft game at school. I thought me and Hilton were crazy running away from nothing. I think that Herobrine is the toughest player in the game he can fly too. I think Herobrine is as tough as superman.
I said, “Wow Herobrine is super strong.”
I know who is most deadly. It is the Enderdragon. Sometimes I like zombies and skeletons. Slenderman I think is 4th best. Creepers are my worst nightmare. They creep up on you and they kill you by exploding. You can build a shelter with your blocks and hide in the best spots. Hilton is a pro at that game. He can kill anything and find the best spots and it is in the middle. If you are on the side, the Creeper will come by the wall and blow you up. That is what Hilton did to Penaia. Then the bell rang and it was time get to class. Our game was so cool. I really enjoyed playing it with Hilton and Penaia.
Hi VJ i'm Chace. I like what you were talking about in this recount about minecraft it is cool how you were describing the enderdragon and Herobrine. Your story looks like it was organised properly. Keep up the good work. See you later.
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